There are a few things wrong with your application. 1.
Activity, I have never seen you on since you posted this application. 2.
Lack of Effort, for "Why should we choose you over other applicants?"
You didn't give a
If you want to apply for a staff position on a Minecraft server, Put some effort and time into your application otherwise it may or will get denied. For an EX; "is built by ( YOUR ) Builders" no need to capital that.3.
Random capitalization within your sentences and throughout your application. Random capitalization will throw off people when reading, it sucks to read when there are random caps.
All-in-all, If I owned this server or was the staff manager for it, I would DENY (With the ability to re-make an application) your application due to #1 and #2
Activity and Effort is the key to success!